Hello again fellow mortals.
I bring you today, the engrossing and epic first chapter of The Renaissance.
In this special edition, I fixed the text and added aditional animation to the critically aclaimed flash series.
This movie originally took 3 months of planning and work to create, so I didnt want it to be brought down by text - faults.
In this first episode, it introduces the main story before our hero embarks on his greatest quest ever, in The Renaissance Chapter 1
Please
Please Please put your story into an animation flash. I really like the idea for it it's just that it isn't an actual flash. I still like the music. What I have read so far is very interesting if you could email me your whole story I would like that. Because I don't think that your work will get passed any more.
Much better!
That was an awesome story, I'm glad I finally had the chance to read it!
yowza
murokhan wrote"but you have to realize that a good majority of reviewers on Newgrounds have the attention span of approximately 1 minute if all that's shown is text and looping music"
this is very, very true, i now present to you and our viewing audience the "top 10 things i did while waiting for this text scroll to end!"
10-stared blankly wondering what that thing in the background was
9- ponderd who made that insepid music
8- ponderd the varius ways i could break the musicians fingers
7- counted my teeth
6- ponderd when the chinease food i orderd would be ready
5- orderd chinease food
4- drank coffee
3- listened to my tv while staying awake somehow
2- masterbated to that thing in the backround
and finaly! 1- hit the 5 button by mistake! thank you & goodnight!
A lot of text!
I enjoyed the story.
But indeed, it would have been better if there was soms sort of 'movie' with it. And if you're using text, trie to avoid white text passing white surfaces, it's hard to read this way.
What is this?
It has no scroll bar so it is sucks!
