Not very good...

Simpler animation, a little more sense (I didn't know what the hell was going on), and cleaner loops of music are all needed.

The repetition of sprites was a piss-off, and the lack of plot sort of annoying. There was so much going on. Just tell a simple story. Use less as far as quantity, but maybe up the quality.

Keep trying. :)

Very good....

The Flash was very nice. Music wise, you had some very nice and fitting choices. What brought your score down was the use of the gradients, and the repition of your animation. Try using all solid colors, and add on alittle. All and all nice work, good job!