One problem...
There just wasn't enough to it. I liked the easy interface (I liked it a lot, like a basic text adventure, which was cool) however, all you did most of the time was click up and sometimes down. There shouldn't have been more uses for the other buttons, to talk to other people and solve some more problems (puzzles if you must). As it stands, it was a nice read, just try to do more, gameplay wise, if you ever make a sequel.