umm strange but oringinal
I thingk it was good in all but think many have said next time just include more and actaully let her use dem gun!
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The Introduction Episode To The Maybe Series "Jane"
well...
i did'nt like it, srry but it just weard!!! you should make a better story and change the caracter maybe
Good flash, but nothing flashy.
Every aspect of this flash was mediocre.
The music was good, but it had long & unneeded pauses in between some of the scenes; and that really messed the quality up a lot.
Most of the sound was good. And the graphics were nice.
I would, however, like to see a Part 2 to this story.
cool
very interesting animation. the music that you took from the audio portal was great and really helped make this movie really good.
Hmm...
It does have potential. It would've been nice if there was a bit more animation to it. The sound was pretty clear, and the characters were well drawn.
Bodie responds:
Thanks, i have started Jane: Epsisode II already and its coming along quite nicely. It also has better drawn pictures and actually some decent animation. I have to admit... this one did seem like it could have been made it powerpoint.
