the sound could have been better, but the style and writing in the animation weren't bad at all!!!

Sound needed improvements but the writing style was alright certainly wasnt the worst thing in the world

crap

the sound was crap, the storyline was crap,but i suppose the animation could have been worse!

OMG

The sound in this flash were really bad i advise you fix it i did chuckle a little but you still get a 0

pretty good

pretty cool you should make another one
but with way more people
...........(& work on the sound a little).