lissen
i demand you make more of this...because i like very much!!!
Author Comments
**its short i know
basic plot up to this point is that the universe's balance is maintained by a group called the overseers, the two characters at the beginning are just two random fighters, the black and white guy is one of the overseers
good to start with...
without the storyline its really confusing... but its a really good start... simon says keep up the good work!
synsacrum responds:
woo, sorry i didn't respond sooner, but anyway thanks for the comment, and i'll try my best to improve on my stories and plots and whatnot
a good start
show some great potential. the charater are good. but it need a story and the sound could be better hope you keep at it. hope to see a new verson soon
synsacrum responds:
hey thanks alot, if i continue this, the story will be further explained in a later clip
Not half bad
This seems to show some potential. It wasn't great animation wise, and lacked completely in story line, but for what was there it shows that if improved it could be quite impressive. More fluid animation, perhaps a plot, and some better music/sound, and you could have some pretty good ratings.
synsacrum responds:
thanks for the comments and advice, and i'll try to work what you suggested
could b improved
needs a little work otherwise gr8! choppy animation, but graphics aren't too bad could work on some of them... better sound mebe and omg finally a preloader gd 4 u, c all u ppl he gets it!!
synsacrum responds:
yeah the preloader for the other one was kinda jacked up, but thanks for the comments and advice
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- Mar 21, 2005
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