Pretty damn bad...
Sorry man but it was.... It had no style in either art or story, horrible sound as it was computer voices and intro music that doesn't go with the theme at all, horrible made sprites and animation for graphics, and none of the jokes were that funny except throwing out the window which cause a little smirk.
If you going to make 2 and want to make it a 3 you are definatly need voice acting, some kind of music that goes with the theme, a story that actually alot more funny (maybe better voice acting would have made the lines more funny), and better animation. Though if you want to be something that might actually get this story noticed a bit you going to need alot of work.... but it was a good attempt and it looks like you can make it better if you put the time and effort into it.