Come on my biker bikey biker!!!

One day I was walking to the shops with some guys from around the corner.
When it suddenly sprinkled a little rain, they chickened out the dicks.
How pussy can you get!?!?!??!

One major problem:

Nobody ever knows what you're talking about when you use an inside joke as your main joke/story.

Everything else was actually pretty good, especially the sound. Try again with something everyone'll be able to get next time.

Shows promise

Your animation style and art are decent. The sound was acceptable, and the voices (such as they are) are pretty good.

Keep working, this is promising.