AWESOME
Cant wait til i get my tablet , man u got skills!
Author Comments
I just ordered a graphics tablet so the sequal to this should be a lot better. plus it will be in daylight, and the story will be revealed.
Looks good so far.
This movie should have been longer. Great job on the optimazing on your flash movie.
I don't see that much in a 400kb submission. you have the potential to make a better movie.
Even if it means a bigger file size just use your potential to it's fullest to make a longer and better movie. I don't mind waiting for the movie to load.
It's long enough for an event to happen but this type of movie is'nt an event piece.
This more of a start to a storyline and that in it self is many events.
Do your research before writing a script just so that your not historically inaccurate. No matter how well ploted out your movie is.
Someone is bound to complain about the movie being historically inaccurate.
you manage to create a small sense of danger within this movie. But still it was'nt long enough to create real suspense. It's more of a rushed attempt at a cliff hanger.
Just because i'm reviewing a little harsh don't mean i don't like your submission in fact i love it. I love the way you drew your night time atmosphere.
It actually looked like it was night time and i was really albe to lose myself myself in this movie and take myself outta reality for a little while.
In closing good so far but this movie is too damn short.
-Mightydein
Colingsmith-art responds:
Thanks for a well thought review. This submission is a prelude to a bigger story, I should have made that more clear.
Glad you like my stuff, i think you'll like the next part a lot more.
-c
nice
sweet graphics can't wait to see next one good job.
it was good start
it was really well done hope it get more story in the next one
nice
that was awesome