This is the first real flash movie I've ever made; I produced all of the vector drawings and did all of my own action scripting. I'm quite proud of myself, and I am very tired after making this movie; all in all, it took me about 15 hours; don't laugh guys, this is my first real movie ;-).
not bad but not too exciting
this movie would have been better if it moved along a little faster...its very slow in the beginning and throughout the movie its almost like the video is playing catch-up with the audio. but its a good idea. just tweak it some more.
Good First Film
Congrats, if this is your first real film.
I read some of the other reviews and some ppl are quite confused about the plot. pERHAps you were trying to go with the Spiderman plot? Peter could have stopped some robber but didn't and that resulted in uncle ben's death.
If that was what you were going after, then you should make things more clear and make sure we all KNOW that the kid's mom died. All we can see is the back end of a car.
All in all, good effort, and i loved the music.
Kinda Lame
You totally ripped off South Park, and your title had very little bearing on the skit. This wasn't terrible, but it wasn't great or original. Maybe if you tried to play it out more like a kids show or something? No, not even then. You show some promise though...
What reason?
I really don't understand how the title plays in with the movie. Kid gets mad at kid, kid goes uses dad as shield, then he crashes into other kids mom.... Need to work on the plot. Pretty much that would help, animation was okay.
And the morale is???
Things happen for a reason??? and what was the reason there???