not bad, not bad at all
i like it, i like it alot, but as the guy before me said, u need a bit more of a storyline, tho that was pretty cool, im giving you top scores =D
Author Comments
I hope actually hope people will like this one. It´s just a little short thing, but all I want is to see if I can get a sad mood in. If you view it please leave a review. Tell me what you think.
Yaleck responds:
Thank you dude. I am working on something now, more based on humor than anything else. I hope I can entertain people in a funny way instead.
Interesting
I felt it was quite interesting in its own view.
Maybe she was put in jail even thou she was innocent, then life in jail made her ugly and slowly killing her body and mind, untill she finaly snapped.
But as it is, we don't know, Yaleck, you should provide more information and expend this movie, its way too short.
Yaleck responds:
i like it that you start thinking of a story yourself. That was what I was hoping for. I have started your imagination. I love to do that. I like to keep people guessing, but your rigt though. I should provide more info.
Thank you for the review.
No purpose - no emotion
Good try, buddy, but I had to blam it. Maybe it's the length. Maybe it's the compete lack of story. It's probably both. The graphics weren't so bad, though. If you'd only expand, I think it could turn out really well. keep trying.
Yaleck responds:
thank you for the review.
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I didn't liked the graphics very much. The details drawn with black pen lines made the graphics too heavy, dirty. With lighter lines it would become clear and look much better. The sound was good, but you need to make the movie longer, following a storyline. The flash ended before I understood what was going on!
Yaleck responds:
Bueno...lo he intentado. estoy pensando en una historia o algo...
Gracias por el ...ehm...como se dice review?
Good start
Overall, not too shabby. The animation was decent, and the music fitting. Expand the plot and give us a storyline, and you may have something...
Yaleck responds:
I´m trying. Problem is, my concentrationspan is quite small so it is harder for me than most people.
thank you for the review