Very decent effort...

...but it could have been much better. Sound, talking about the voices, needs some serious fix to be more audible. The text messages were a bit too big compared to the screen. The background of this flash and the general performance, however, is quite good and is decent. It seems like you really wanted it to look like a ganster movie, and it was a really good try. Knowing that a second chapter is coming, I hope to see a better flash from you.

god damn.

thats the worst piece of shit i've ever seen. just thought i'd check out what you make after you condemned pope for a day, a great flash. yours is absolutely shit. no wonder it got front page and you didnt

Ke apero

Te botate Eduardo ta aperisimo de verdad, na mano sigue asi que seras el padre de la animacion dominicana.

jajaja

jajaja, re bueno estuvo Cicla!!!!!!

ohhh my god, your movie is great!!! the special effects are great! mmmmmm chapter 2 i want to see it!!!
You´re great..... The owners es lo mejor que ví!!!
jajaja the sound and the light effects are great! try to make best shoots!
hasta la siguiente.... your friend Tom

Decent

Ok there were many Tweening Problems you had, When the guy get shot in the leg the blood splatters on his shirt, And when hes breathing the blood doesnt move on the shirt, but the shirt moves...The charator move ments whernt that good, You did pretty good other wise, I Like your art style.