not bad
it was a pretty good animation, but it would've been better if it was longer.
Author Comments
My second cartoon. Though the audio quality isn't the best, I was really aiming towards getting something out there, and getting it created.
I never had any idea how difficult it is to get proper audio when you don't have the equipment for it.
Based off my daily comic strip, Designation Se7en.
You can read it at http://www.designationse7en.tk
Thx for tip 1 and 2.
While the movie was funny it lacked much needed angles it was all frontal or right side. Also i would sudgest something a litle bit longer. Overall i think this was a very good movie yet it was short.
haha
yeah i'll use those tips man. Thanx
good tips
LoL good tips, but i'm not much of a game freak like my friend who is addicted to Halo 2. Yeah i'm gonna be a senior next year, kindof scary. LoL that guy finally wakes up at night! hahahah i thought it was over and the movie just looped but i was patient enough. I think you should change the umm beginning It's a plain white background with Text that isn't very appealing.
-AnzRage
A good offering but you could've gotten a 3
The good:
The most important thing-Great file compression. Some artists on Newgrounds make an animation that's over a megabyte with the same run time as yours.
Slick visual composition and decent voicework.
The bad:
Could've had less inside jokes and more jokes with punchlines that even "outsiders" can get
You don't ALWAYS have to draw your characters from the side. There are at least 179 other possible angles to show them from, and you'll need to know at least 8 if you want a good webcomic.
The ugly:
Again, good style and a nice short. As a plus to your webcomic, it would rate a 3. But judged alone, the animation falls short. Just keep working on it and you'll see what I mean.