I admit that the ending was quite clever. It's just that I think certain parts went on too long. You didn't need to have that part go on so long. It's still nice to watch. The animation is quite good. I had no idea what to expect from this. I'm glad this was submitted for school!
It's just so ironic. With your Daily 2nd Place, you can't be accused of making something bad. The best part is probably the beginning. It just shows a lot of fluidity. That's great in a cartoon.