needs touch ups!
now, this got a decent score as it was, so imagine how good it will be if you finish it off, clean up the graphics a little - try not to make the characters look so simple, add some detail to their faces and make sure the outline isnt a perfect circle - and added some danm sound! haha.
i think that the story line is pretty good so far, even if it is a little over used.
also, the animation is pretty damn good as it is now, so dont change that :) i love all of the effects you use.
so yeh, just get some sound, do a little bit of touch-uping on the graphics, and finish it off! it will be awesome!
6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)