good.
but how do u make a flash?
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Just a little something that i came up with when i was trying to sleep, i thought it was hilarious at the time, i guess i was tired =P
I'm really only 12 years old
Lol, im realy twelf jears olt, zo donot kritik mi speling
Lol, i liked it 5/5 - 10/10.
many would do well
I was really impressed how you brought a 'slideshow' to life. The simple changes do well to illustrate your points and the way it normally goes off is actually quite visually appealing.
The menu is great and the fireworks at the start/end are rather stylishly drawn.
Only criticism is its limited nature and the fact that I found it not amazingly funny. Sure, I agree with your points and some made me smile, but it's not the greatest material... I never came close to chuckling.
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Still, it's a flash I enjoyed and many would do well to watch.
Ohls responds:
Another great review. Only thing you forgot was to comment on the elevator music hehe.
As with most of my other old stuff. I found them a lot better when they were made. I remember thinking this was hilarious. I don't think so now though.
i just didnt like it i guess
im not goin t be a twat bout it but well it was very short and im sure there were some funny bits that i probs didnt pik up, i found it hard readin froo cus it went fast but im sure evry1 ses that, next time make it longer and add a little action
soz and good luck
come on
well it make me smile once but the text was too fast, i didn´t like it
