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Desert Tank: Episode One

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I hope you enjoy this, it's the first episode of a series depicting the modern Iraqi war. Turn up the volume and check out my website at www.eclipsepictures.tk

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Not great, not terrible.

It's decent, but nothing new or exciting. The graphics are also ok, but they look too hand-drawn. The sound is probably the best aspect of this submission.

not bad for a first

That wasn't bad for a first submition, I see protental in you, all you need to improve is the drawings and animation.
Question what was the white sqaure button in the top left corner of the screen.

Average

You have the graphics needed to do a little violent flick here---but expand on the idea; more soldiers---blood and explosions---a longer animation to show it all, of course. I'll be watching for a sequel---nice job on the tank, too.

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you need to spend more time on your graphix, and needs to be longer, a story, and much more violence!! but u no every one has to start from somewhere so..... you will get better trust me

Ussually I'm exceptionally lenient with my reviews

I didn't like this movie at all; little plot, subpar drawings, lack of length, etc... From what I have seen, you could probably make some bad-ass vehicles if you maybe used the line tool and more coloring rather than just the paint brush tool for everything. Try again, I'm sue you could do ahell of alot better.

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3,890
Votes
16
Score
2.21 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 27, 2005
1:39 PM EST