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no nudity, no violence... sorry guys... check it

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Twas okay

it was okay, but i have to give it a high score because i love freestyle skiing.

Lots of suggestions for you

The graphics were so sketchy. I can tell you have artistic talent but you don't want to make too many drawings or do a lot of work, you just want to use one drawing and tween it across the screen or use a repeated movie clip over and over to show people playing instruments.

I have several suggestions for you. This one almost got blammed, your lucky it didn't. I think that the main reason it almost got blammed was because of your pathetic author's comments. Whenever you combine the statements "I'm new at this," "I hope this doesn't get blammed," and "I tried my hardest," it says "BLAM ME!" to 80% of NG users. Work on that next time. Also to get rid of the sketchiness, try doing some FBF stuff and raising the framerate.
One final word: for god's sake, get a good song!

hey not bad for one of your first movies...

...submitted to NG that is. was it your first submission? or have you had previous stuff blammed before?
anyway, this was quite good i thought. the graphics were very un-n00bish, and quite detailed at times. i think that your animation skills are also good, and show potential. even though the animation in this was a little slow, that hardly matters since this is one of your first i guess.
overall, it was a little slow paced, and im not sure what it was about, but a good way to show off your skills thus far. nice work.
6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)

Improve it

It didn't really flow that well, it was kind of like a bunch of random scenes. There was no indication that it was going to end, no conclusive feeling, it just ended. I didn't get it also, like what was the connection between the skier and the band? It was too small, you should do something about that, and you should spend more time drawing and animating. Keep on it.

YES!

An "under judgement" submission that didn't completely suck! Keep up the good work.

Credits & Info

Views
2,439
Votes
9
Score
3.54 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 26, 2005
7:51 PM EST