Big improvement.
This is far better than the first episode but still lacks some things. As M-A-R-C-U-S said, you definitely need someone with english as a first language to do the storyline text for you and character text etc. You could also make the text come up a bit faster and at a mor regular speed. It was a bit jerky and slow for me. Finally, I think you should have less time where the characters are just standing there in a repeated loop pose like the cape flapping. It can enhance the storyline but i think you made it last a tad too long.
But, as I said before, a vast improvement on TT 1 and a nicely done movie. Look foward to seeing the next one