Could be much better
I think this needs a lot of work. Maybe when you fix a few things re-release it. The idea looks ok but the execution was flawed.
Problems:
1. Sound was broken and crappy sounding
2. Graphics were a bit too jerky even for sprites I think. Too many removed frames in animations perhaps.
3. The storyline was difficult to follow as a lot of the text was incorrect or fragmented english.
After a bit of work this could be salvaged as a movie.
Brain Damage: 35%