Vommit.

That was kinda lame. The audio you use consistently ticks me off. I wish you'd learn what good quality sound is because it always is a negative for you. But not only was the audio off on this, so was everything. The buildup from the credits into it was great. The having a man suddenly turn into a poorly drawn butterfly was just weird, in an incoherent annoying way. You've gotta take your flashes and make them go somewhere. Randomness has to be done in an appealing way, not the everyone in school is going to make fun of you because you're the smelly kid type of way. Just please, pick something that actual has value and go for it.

Acid, anyone?

That shit was trippy and random! I liked it!

what?

... good style, weird ass story

um..dont do drugs?

well this was interesting to say the least, and yay for laser beam shooting butterfly...um..people...

Still pointless.

it started out so professional, but holy red eye beams batman. i love obscurity with the rest of them, but i'd love to see you make obscure thing that are this long but with a plot. challenging for you maybe but it'll only get better. that was great, your choice of music is always perfect, and lead up throughout was great. looked like you got rushed toward the end though, which probably couldnt have been helped if it happened, but i think it would have been better if it hadn't.