I think it has potential...
Well, this seems like it has potential, in a sick and humorous way. The only problem with this trailer, is that it didn't really show what your upcoming "movie" is about. I understand it's supposed to have gruesome death, but if there is anything else to the movie, your trailer didn't show it. I think the best way to convey my thoughts is through a quote from the classic heart warming novel by Alexander Dumas, "The Count of Monte Cristo"...."To Dantes all this was perfectly incomprehensible. In the first place, he could not understand a man risking his life and liberty for such unimportant matters as the division of a kingdom; then, again, the person referred to were wholly unknown to him. Napoleon certainly he knew something of, inasmuch as he had seen and spoken with him; but the other individuals alluded to were strangers to him even by name."