I thought this was pretty dumb. I mean, it was just a guy eating himself. I'm sorry that I can't give you any tips on clay mation. I know nothing about flash myself. My only submission was some clip show. I know when I'm not talented.
It was too small. Well, you seem to stop this later. You did make "Jack - The Chalkboard", which was great. Your other stuff wasn't that great. Everyone has to start somewhere.