good music, good animated..but the end sucks..
make better end next time..
It stops at the end suddenly because i've not finished it, I've not been able to finish it for like 4 months cus ive been doing GCSE work so I just decided to send it in anyway.
When a young man looses his little brother in the war the images of death and destruction haunt his dreams, now as an old man the story of past is told in this short story animation. This is a war project created for an extended piece of coursework about a painting I finished late last year, it took about a week to make but ive recently made a couple of improvments. As I doubt i'll be able to complete it in time for my GCSE's I have just decided to hand it in because im now working on an espionage cartoon called The Agent. Hope you like it but if you think the characters look a bit funny its cus I drew everything on the computer, anyway vote fairly please cus im hoping of finishing some of my better work ready for college.
good music, good animated..but the end sucks..
make better end next time..
YOU FUCKED IT UP
I LOVE THAT SONG, YOU DID HORRBILE GRAPHICS AND CUT OFF MORE THAN HALF OF THE SONG, MAKE A BETTER ONE MAN WITH LESS SUCKY GRAPHICS AND BETTER CONCEPT bth there talking about civil war, and i dont get the clock
wtf
make a better ending
Very nice.
Sad, and meaningful. However the ending is far too sudden, that's really a letdown. A movie like this usually needs a slow ending instead of being cut right off.
I wonder if you could perhaps add to this and submit a new version, one that's fully completed? If so I think you could make front page =)
Well done. 4/5
um?
guy loses brother in war...k guy is sad.....k brother comes back from dead after a random shell hits the ground to throw a watch at his still living brother....not k also wtf is up with the ending? noice music though