Nicely drawn, but too slow-paced
The drawing style is nice. I disagree with the reviewer who doesn't like the individually-drawn windows; I think this touch made this look much more crafted than the typical repeating grid. The weapons were well-drawn. If you're going to so directly borrow from Madness in terms of style, you should also emulate its pacing. The flow of action in this was too slow and even, so there was never any real feeling of excitement. I quickly found myself wondering when it would end whilst admiring the detail work on the weapons, rather than being engrossed in it, wondering what would happen next, which is critical for an action piece. Still, nice effort and at least as of now it's being scored too low.