Holden Would Break Down If He Viewed This

Holden Caulfield would not have sounded anything like your depiction. You make him sound PHONY. Those familiar with the popular novel, as I am, will understand what little you've done with this medium. "F" for the sound.

And what's with Danny DeVito as the cabbie from this snippet of dialog? Vintage TV's "Taxi"? Wrong decade. "C" for attempt at humor.

The other snippet of dialog (from the Cliff Notes version, no doubt) you chose is not well related to the first, making it seem randomly chosen. "D" for continuity

Apparently, you were influenced only by what your English teacher highlighted in class "discussion" of Holden's psychoanalysis. "C"

Glad to see no stupid violence. "A" on that count.

Overall, a "C" would be generous.

Just came shy of all my points.

I was drawn in by the title(being a book nerd), loved the graphics . The audio wasn't of good quality. What I could make out was good, but the rest was blasted out by static fuzz.

work on sound next time

The title of this really caught my attention, but I was horribly disappointed in the total lack of quality with regards to sound. What good is doing an animation if no one can understand a word being said? Please spend a little more time on the sound quality and that alone will go a long way towards making your animations more enjoyable to everyone.

HOW THE HELLL

That was the worst sound I've ever heard! You can't understand shit! Jesus I mean it's so impossible to understand ANYTHING, it ruins the whole flash. The graphics are OK but damn you need to fix your microphone.

darn

this would probably had been good if only the sounds was better...
nice graphics, that's what kept me from blamming