I'm Going To Review This Right.
I was reading previous reviews, and all of them state that this is similar to a lot of the style used by David Firth. But you haven't seen much of his work, much less it doesn't seem to me like you are influenced by it. So over all, with that out of the way, I think this is a good flash. I like your style, and you are getting good at it. This story line does not make much sense, like you said, but it has a concept, and I liked it. Keep up the good work, I will look for more of your stuff.