Not bad!
Author Comments
This is a collab of two movies that me and a friend made. We're both 14 and we want constructive reviews only please! That means NO flaming. Also please watch BEFORE you vote.
Thank you. :)
**UPDATE**: i realise the sound on the second one was fucked up. that was my fault not the author's.it should have played low quality. go here for a good version.
http://www.stickslaughte
r.com/portal/view.php?id=
6998
okay
a Colab type flash.
Man_mountain, nice choice of music, you did a decent job animating those blob guys. graphics could have been detailed a litle bit more.. but that was weird how he fought that one guy then was on a motorcycle and landed inside a muffin.
b_da_bomb, a pong type flash movie... these have been done a lot.. but I guess it was alright to watch. It was animated rather smoothly. voice acting needed work and perhaps a better mic or better audio recording program may help you there.
nice work overall though.
Man-Mountain responds:
thx for the review. sorry bout the voices in the pong movie. they messed up when the two movies were being intergrated.
whoops!
not bad
quite the unique animation you got here, not my type, but cool nontheless.
Er..
It was interesting..Ill give ya that
Umm not bad
ok here goes.
1- sort that loading screen out it was screwed and bad loading screens are one of my pet hates.
2- most of the animation was good, but I mean that bike in the first one well yeah so there where a few touches there to be done
3- the sound in the second one was shit as u really need to work on that, I mean the skateborder comes along and you get a really loud noise but it stops half way across the screen, then you can barely hear the voices (which by the way crackled a lot and if they where your voices then have you not hit puberty yet?)
But otherwise not bad it scores
*** outa 5 but only just
