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Reviews for "The Joint Project"

The JOINT project, funny.

Is it called that because you were both smokin when you made this pile of randomness?

Either way, the only reason this made it is because of the quality of the menues and the fact that they were together. If these were seperate, they both wouldve been blammed within seconds.

Graphics-4- They were not that great, and very typical. Try improving and making something unique.

Style-5- The five is for the overall style. The menu was there, the matrix pong had its moment. The cupcake was...umm...nevermind.

Sound-3- Not good, hard to understand words. The sound was off during the pong thing.

Violence-2- He murdered that giant cupcake. They crushed a pong ball. You people are desensitizing me.

Interactivity-0- Id count the menu, but it didnt feel that interactive, so Ill give this an N/A

Humor-1- I can understand this being funny if you are 14 years old and the person making this. For the rest of us, it really had very little humor at all.

Overall-4- Its below average. You people obviously have a lot of potential, but this didnt realize it. Make more unique graphics, improve your style (matrix is overdone), buy a better Microphone, and make it funnier, please.

Man-Mountain responds:

thanks for the indepth review.
a pleasure to read compared to some ive seen.

Sorry...

Well, never has asking anyone not to flame stopped people, so it's pointless to do so. But I wont flame you. But that movie did suck. Lacked in plot, the sound on the 2nd one was out of sync, and the voice over was horrible recorded. Fix all of those, then using that learning experience make something good.

I expect to see it in the portal next month.

Man-Mountain responds:

okay.in the second one for the sound.
it's better on low quality.
i tried to toggle but i guess it didn't work.

Needs improvement

It needs improvement in the sound department graphic department and also in the plot department (this first one's plot didn't really make a whole lotta sense ) but keep trying there's potenial there.

Man-Mountain responds:

okay thx

A start?

Problem with the first one is that it is not very cohesive. Not to mention a bit racist for no reason... if you make it funny thats one thing, but the blue ball just kills the black ghetto ball with the knife and gets on a motorcycle. I'm not sure whether to be offended or confused, but I really end up not caring. The second movie was actually quite good up until the end with the exception of the sound. You could have something there.

Man-Mountain responds:

racist? shit dude i ain't no racist.
hope it didn't come across that way tho. i just use the colour black coz its associated with bad. eg. agents out of matrix.
it would have been a different thing if i made the ball brown.

not bad

stupid name,, has nothing to do with it, the voice acting sounded preety bad, you have a high pitched voice, well your saying you probally do to, ya, lol, i do, but i dont put my voice into my movies.

but it wasnt bad, i dont really like the ball style, i used to, but now ts not good unless you know how to do it properlly, which is HIGH HIGH HIGH frame rate, and the pong was kool, i liked how good it went together, but the end talking part recked it.

not bad though, keep working on your drawings, your not bad animators.