yey!!

A review when me and Chris (maker of this cartoon) were talking about this cartoon:

Patrick says:
you drew this all?
Chris says:
yeah
Chris says:
but its really shit
Patrick says:
thats pretty good
Patrick says:
lol
Chris says:
its shit
Patrick says:
yeah your right ahah
Patrick says:
its stopped
Chris says:
i can't will till you see my new stuff
Chris says:
i know
Patrick says:
lol WOT!?
Chris says:
couldnt be bothered finishing it
Patrick says:
wow!
Chris says:
that how unbothered i was
Patrick says:
thats the bestest piece.... nah just kidding
Patrick says:
just for that, I'm gonna comment on it
Chris says:
its seriously shit
Chris says:
lol

We have a conclusion that its shit :) Not bad graphics I'll admit

Amazing...

Wow that was amazing for your first flash movie!!! Great job I loved it :D!

Promising

Could turn out to become an interesting series. One suggestion is that you might want to turn down the background music as it interferes with the dialogue.

ok, but...

fix your keyboard:

'nnight'
'loadi'
'pl'

seriously.