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^^Good Points^^
I liked the many music choices in this one. From Benny Hill to Alice in Chains. Good stuff! I thought Smellypetersons part was wonderful. it was very funny in its awkwardness and quite entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
Chrome-'s part was nothing special, though he's not known for special things. And Martin Luther's part isn't that impressive either. I could make something like that...lol

Ummm...

Ok, I thought I'd go on and talk about each of you flash and express my view point in the process.

Ok the first one was the only one that had a form of story going for it. from what I see two guys were looking for a treasure, but as an end result couldn't find it, and the fat one sumons a holy ball that grant them a wish....Well...ok, while I see a plot I must ask, why didn't he get the ball up there in the first place. My suggestion would be to plan out some of you plots carefully.

Chrome's Benny Hill: Ok, it's got Benny Hill in it...but why a picture of a dog spinning around? I know it may be just me, but I can find all the funniest in it. I'm more aware of better uses of flashloops that use Benny Hill themes such as the kid the crash his head in the car from looking outside and stuff. i would suggest studing other themes using the same song.

Finally, MLK Jr. I don't exactly understand the concet of that. Mind giving me the idea behind the 2 second bit?

Overall, I suggest studing flash very carefully and keep practing...I know you guys can make good flash sometimes even if you only take a days time to meet your deadline.

Just keep trying will you...hopefully you'll improve.

I have no exprence with flash, but i know practice is a key to everything.

Argh.

Where did you get the preloader? Honest to god, where did you get it? That was a really good preloader. That was the only good thing about this.

But the cartoon...wasn't even a cartoon. Just a bunch of pictures put together in 2 minutes. Takes more than that to make a good flash. Honestly, nobody cares how fast you make these. The thing that people care about is quality. Except for what that one guy said about the mass voters who have no talent in anything whatsoever, and those anime fanboys(I've seen anime, and I HATE IT.)

Why must you make these crap-tastic cartoons? Nobody wants to see a rotating picture for 2 minutes straight. Or some flashy thing going "w00t!" The first one was drawn good.

And in the authors comments you say something about an "epic series of awesomeness". You are the most egocentric group of people in the world. Honest to god. And you know it's crap. What will you accomplish by pissing people off with these? NOTHING.

Just make something good. NOT A PRELOADER. Some good cartoon. And don't come up with some snappy, mean response to me either, because I've seen you guys do that. " You made no flash, I did." WHO CARES? NOT ME.

wtf

that wasnt very good. why dont u guys put any effort into your work?? the only one that was remotely good was the 1st one because it was drawn pretty well and i liked the music. the 2nd was stupid: a rotating picture with some music thats taken off some other flash. the third one is similar to the 2nd one. no animation involved. why do u make these flashes? im sure if u spent more time on them u could come up with something good. like call it monthly toon. but this is crap and i cant beleive why it hasnt been blammed.

wow..

Please upgrade ur stander of work or dont submit at all.

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