Okay
It was okay. Not the best I've seen. Work on it and it will get better. Good Luck.
Author Comments
EDIT: Thanks for the thumbnail, whoever did it!
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my 2nd flash with backrounds that are hand drawn! w00t! It's one of those weird random flashes with little story line. Its pretty weird but i liek it!!!Q1
0mg i got into teh portal!! htank u newgrounds peeps!!!
notorious responds:
lol this is 2 years old. I gave up this series a long time ago, but thanks for the good review!
Intersting
Alright.. it has a preloader.... +points for that,
I dont consider myself an idiot, but i saw no plot whatsoever in this so its my guess you didnt bother with one, therefore a rather senseless flash.. - points for that
Graphics where acceptable, but animations could be better, espescially the fading of the weird small thing
I suggest adding a plot or some sense into this, because for just a random senseless flash to be good, the animations the sound and the atmosphere in particular will have to be a lot better.
Cheers and good luck with future flash
notorious responds:
Thanks for that helpful review! Usually i just like to let my stories flow instead of thinking of a plot before hand, which usually makes the story too confusing or just not existent enough. This was my first flash on newgrounds, and I definitly HAVE inproved since then :)
interesting..
even your earlier work is of high quality. Not quite matching your most recent animations, but by far better than most. Nice.
notorious responds:
wow you think so?? thanks not many people think that i guess considering the score of this but lol whatever thanks for the good review!
HAHA SWEEEEEEEEEETTTTT! dude
That was the best one!
ps. you make good movies, watch some of my stuff, (they are old but ya and not really of what i cud do right now) but still if you can watch them and review them.
-peace out
LOL i loved it
even though the graphics wernt that great, i really loved the little kid thing with the chainsaw mouth lmao made me laugh hard
notorious responds:
lol there have been allot of comments about the chainsaw thing. Glad u liked it!
