ok

wow that was random and mildly david firthy except less disturbing
if u could just smooth out the subliminal message than this wud be awesome and
if the potato salad got a bit more violent

Re: Funny but needs improvement

I think that the idea was funny and that with faster, better looking graphics, this could really be a funny short that could get a really high rating. Work on this a bit and resubmit. I think this has potentional to be something really funny.

funny

Pretty funny, especially the voices. The last part was the best though, with the Resistance is futile thing.

So So...

The graphics are pretty bad, but everything else is pretty good. Potato Salad...Gone BAD!

5pam is Goooood

lolololollol It gets better in the middle lol