Awkward.

Story: awkward.
Action: awkward.
Narration: awkward.
Abrupt and awkward ending: abrupt and awkward.
I'm sure you put alot of effort into this. Too bad the fruits of your labor turned awkward.
Awkward.

Cool

Awesome graphics.

Exploding Drink Anyone?

This was a little better with more violence but i think the 3Dness is a little slow in some areas and when the shaolin boy was talking, some of his sentences were cut off suddenly near the end of them.

not bad

it was an alright one, only suggestions that i have for you, is improve the quality of both the audio and the graphics.

3

Sorry, but I couldnt get past the horrible quality of the film. I couldnt understand what was being said, alot of the dialogue was cut off, bad accents make it hard to hear, bad quality, etc. The music sounds like it was recorded by someone tapping on a mic. The visuals probably looked good until they were imported into Flash. Now it looks like a 265 color monitor. Keep trying, but look into ways to improve the quality of your films. Action was cool though. 2 in the portal, 3/10