Waste of time

The intro was stick figures, which could have been made to even human-like beings relatively quickly considering you can animate them the same way, even start with stick figures then just edit the body parts one by one. The skyline scene went on too long, and I x'd out the first time thinking that that was it after the music stopped, until I read that there were words.
The guy didn't move his mouth at all. Not even cropped up and down, not even a black hole. He just didn't move his mouth. And you couldn't hear what he was saying. Keep it up though, I think you're improving somewhat.

uhhh..

Well, I couldn't understand a word that was said. Even if I could i don't think that it would have been that interesting. Don't continue this series.

too bad

sorry, i'm sure that would've been at least a little interesting, but i couldn't understand a word that was said. take your mouth away from the mic so we can understand you. it sounded like you were just constantly mumbling and blowing into it. better luck next time

Mic Help is here

if you want to get good sound hold the mic a half an inch away from your mouth on the corner of your lips . . . this will eliminate the air sound from T's an P's and the swish sound from S's. The side of the mouth is the best place to mic due to the fact of how you say things if you dont belive me say your alphabet while holding your hand first above your mouth then below and the third time on the side you will notice distinct air interuptions when you hold your hand above your mouth an below your mouth.

-Swamp

woaaa

OMG, my ears, my neighboors... waaa. I turned my speakers volume up so that I could hear what was played at the beginning and then!!! when the scene of the skyline appeared, the music almost blew my head off! And after this shock and having the volume turned down again.. the next scene came.. and I barely could hear anything because it was too quiet.

Soooo, could you please fix the sound? make it on an even level and not loud and quiet and loud and quiet? and an advice, keep a certain distance from your mic to avoid the typical not wanted sound like when you speak a P and it's overleveled. You can adjust the mic recording volume in your windows volume and sound settings so if you have a greater distance it won't be to quiet.

Another thing, it's too long lasting at the same picture, too slow. You need to move on quicker with your scenes otherwise the viewers gets annoyed because nothing happens.

BUT I will not only place critism here. Your graphics were very nice :)

Maybe you could iron out the ruffles, resend it and it will be maybe really good :)

Cheers,
me