Pretty good but bad stunts.
Pretty good for a beginer if you are.
And the sound was pretty good.: (
Reasonably funny. Pkay for a beginner, which I assume you are.
A beginner? I guess I am. Thanls for the review
It seems that your work is extremely influenced by rob Lewis, both in form and setup. You have a nice start, but should probably do the following next time.:
Faster pace, some those stunts should not have taken as long as they did.
Create anticipation..music, sounds..'character charisma.' make crowds or something.
Get rid of that god-awful splat sound, use more sounds.
Have a richer background, it doesn't have to be magnificient, but solid colors just don't cut it.
Fundamentally it was a good stick animation, there are just things that need to be improved upon.
Thank-you for the helpful advice, I will definitely take it into account. You're right about being influenced by Rob Lewis, I have been a fan of his work for several years.
The first stunt was promising, then it went downhill after that. And whats up with that "splat" sound effect, very kindergarden.
A lot of people say that about the first stunt, I don't know why. I didn't spend any more time on that one than the others.