haha funny

~~REVIEW~~
Well you did bring some good humor to it, and the artwork was not so bad either i was impressed. just abit more effort next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and more story next time

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining short here

~X~

Short and stupid

Well, that was a waste of my time. Why did you even make this? There is no redeeming quality to this movie. Oh, and by the way, I don't think anyone could get drunk from one beer. Please don't submit things like this.

Laydi Nite

hehe

This is awesome. Just goes to show you what happens when people are not sober any more and are completely drunk. hehe.. i do and you do.. so what the hell? lets.. F@#$ .. haha that was just the greatest line i've heard all night. very nice work with this flash!

3.5

It is nice seeing more and more shorts on Newgrounds nowadays that consist of a huge build-up to a funny ending. I thought the bit was pretty funny, and straight to the point, and only needs a little improvement. Your timing for his proposal was a little off, the movie would have really worked well if her response was just a little quicker. Your design for the characters was a bit to simple for my taste, not terrible, just too simple. The camera adjustment at the end, where their outlines were "muffled" was a nice addition. The voices need some serious work, which you are already aware of. This shows a lot of promise... good luck.

Ryan

not really funny but i get the point.

I agree with the other guy. This flash is not too crap for someone that just done it in his spare time. BUT it's nice if you try a bit harder and be more serious about your flash, because i personally think that was pretty halfed ass with the drawings, and why was the waiter upside-down? I hope that was supposed to be funny. Please create a better story line because this was just plaine boring.