The story of a man that has been horribly disfigured, and is out to seek revenge. I know the drawings and flash skills are subpar, but give me a chance...Im learning and doing what I can to get better at flash as I go along. Give the story a try and hopefully that will be enough for you to look past some other things.
meh...
graphics seem rather poor... but voice acting is alright.. that's funny how you used some program to make the voice so deep. that character you made... he just slides without moving.. that's very weird. This movie looks like it needs work with graphics.. some subtitles would be nice to add cuz i don't know what the hell he's saying sometimes.
not bad
it was alright, a bit different, but it was cool.
ha, fehler. i get it
unless u didnt intend the pun
for those who never learned German, Fehler means 'mistake'.
you're style isnt so bad, but the whole 'revenge for what they did to me' thing has been done a lot.
nevertheless, you're learning and it was alright. not radically new, but a good attempt.
I liked it.
It was alright, it wasmt great but it was alright. I'm looking forward for part two.
ok..
this is the truth your story line is the best bit.... but a part from the descent story line it sucked.. the graphics were shotty and the animation was crappy.. but if you keep praticing and look at some tutorials or something you will probley end up making a good flash cartoon... ps. if thats the main charcter make him more cooler looking and mobile instead of a crappy weel. because that wll just make it harder to make action scenes cooler looking.