it was OK
i looked like a rippoff from pencilmation but great work for ur first flash :)
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Hi :D this is my first flash film. i couldnt add any sound because i end up with problems so sorry if its a bit boring without it...(or if sound wouldnt help anyway heheh)
i would really like loads of critisism to help me get that bit better :D
LMAO that was awesome
wow that was awesome even without the sound you did a very good job yay! :D
pretty good
ive seen somethign like this tho 2 things actually
Not bad.
Not bad for first flash.
Keep going! ;)
err ok i guess
the animation was decent, some negatives i noticed were u had to write "bomb" on a bomb to show it was a bomb and "air pump" on air pump to show it was an airpump, stuff like that the animation and drawings should say themselves. Sound would be good and uhh keep at it.
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