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^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty nice. The animations were pretty cool, as they all flowed together, instead of just creating new scenes out of nothing. Cool music and nice colors used.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't really sync anything to the music, which always impresses me when I see a FBF movie.

Great stuff

To start, I would just like to point out that alot of people have put in some very nice reviews in this submission, and some of them have not. People who have out of no where and point black said this was shit are absulutly out of there minds.

"If you are giving this submission a low score, please offer constructive criticism that will be useful to the artist. The review space is not a place for you to act like a total asshole."

Do not let this be your last submission, just because a couple of mindles pricks have no taist and could ever do better. I thought it was great but it has a couple fualts.

1. No more sticks. Some times, using sticks in movies are necessary, (The Two Bananas) but... in this case, it was not.
2. Blood looked like crap. But I guess thats the best you can do using Sticks.
And 3. Make it smoother/cleaner with the dot thing.

Make more and ill injoy them.

~ Josh.

Not bad

As a collection of images it's not bad. The randomness, which is recognised in your title, does mean that it doesn't really hang together. If there were any 'morals' in the piece then maybe that would help, but this was more a set of pictures.

I liked the style a lot, and it's something I've not seen much in the last ten years. Go back to the nineties and Eastern European animation and there was tonnes of stuff like this, and those also felt like they were a bit lost in what they were trying to achieve. Maybe that's why they died out too...

But still. I can see there's a lot of work gone into it, and I think that some of it has paid off, but maybe you should focus on getting a central theme. 'Morals' suggests that there was going to be a theme but that never really appeared. Instead you concentrated on the randomness. That's fine if randomness was what you were going for, but I don't think it was.

All the best for your next animation.

Yeah...

Ok, I guess that was an okay flash, it's not like nothing I've seen before. I mean, some parts of it confused me, like the guy sitting by the window. I didn't get what the point of that was, but I think I wasn't paying attention to alot of it anyway...

This stuff has got potential...

...I really liked the theme of it all. It´s good to see someone who actually wants something with his flash, and not just fucks around with stickmen rippin each others guts out to some matrix-sounding big-beat...
But there are a couple of things u gotta improve, dunno how good a drawer u are, but this dont look all too complex. Try to find some drawing methods and learn that stuff (that´s what i´m doin, got loads of ideas for animations, it´s just that i really suck at drawing. Even if the program can back me up, i still suck... :)
The music was phat, but crappy quality like shit. That´s allways a problem with flash animations here on NG thou.
I´d really like to see more stuff from ya so keep ur head up n make some more. It´s the only way to learn, right? :D
Peace!!!