This is something I had to do for college. The animation is OK but It was going to be better and I didnt have time. It's basically about some guy who tries to take the train one day. Hope you like it.
It might lagg a bit in one or two places.
For those of you who played my "Dominion Assault" (I know not many of you who did play it, i'm not exactly popular on here) I'm making a sequal to it with the added suggestions to it, hopefully out soon.
very nice
graphics look very detailed... the guy is reading a paper waiting to ride the train.. gets on and has no where to sit... heh.. haha.. old ladies.. trying to talk to them is like trying to talk to a wall. You have good use of the blurr effect. There sure are a bunch of weirdos on that train.. hahaha.. "oh look there's my stop" damn that was funny. oh shit.. it's a good thing he didn't stay on the train. very very nice flash movie.. i cannot wait to see more also.
I like.
Enjoyable little tale. A pleasant and inoffensive little story thats fun. You don't sound Liverpudian by the way mate, do you just study there and come from elsewhere? If so, my guess is Scotland. Keep up the great work anyway, make some more.
Thanks for the review, glad you liked it.
Nope i'm not scottish, I do come from Liverpool. I tried to hide my accent so people would understand what I said.
I liked
I really enjoyed the visual story telling, really great. Tough the graphics weren't really so great they were okay, sounds were okay and the stoty was okay, keep up the good work.
then again, maybe he shouldn't of! haha
i thought that was pretty good. everything was well made, but my only problem was the audio... especially at the start of the movie. it was pretty slow moving, and the audio was very low in terms of volume. that was probably the movies biggest downfall, but overall it was entertaining none the less. good work.
7/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!)
Thanks for the review, I watched my animation back and yeh your right about the audio. I'll fix that at some point
Thanks for the thumbs up
Very humerous, I laughed basically throughout it!
I laughed, i guess it was just the fact that his expression in the begining and such lol it was good... Great job the loading bar was great, it made me instantly hooked! Congradulations on the great score so far... a 3.51 hopefully youll get a shading :) Keep up the awesome work, I will look forward to your next submissions, and in the meantime check out the ones you have now!
- four out of five on the portal vote
- eight out of ten on the review voting
-Jamie