What was the point?
So, someone starts a massive murdering to get someone out of detention, dies in the process, and fails to make any lasting effect because the detainee goes back into detention the next day?
The music was good, I'll give it that much. The sound effects, decent.
However, as a whole, I'd say the writing gave no thought to where the movie should go. It wasn't humorous, it wasn't fleshed out enough to make it dramatic, and there were too many near-still moments for it to be action-y.
Also, Johnson - Stop bitching at anyone who says things like "Stop making flash, this was horrible." As a submitter, you WILL get responses like that. The best movie made would have someone saying "Blarg this is shit." Next time someone tells you how shitty they think something is, don't bitch and moan to them about it.