ok
not bad, a bit short, but it was alright while it lasted.
A man named marvin.....erm.
ok
not bad, a bit short, but it was alright while it lasted.
I think it would be ok if it was explained better.
That Marvin guy was kinda creepy but there was no explanation for any of it.
I assume the tombstone was the final resting place of the guy in the tent, but it would have been quirkier if it was Marvin's grave. You never know, Marvin's kind of geeky looking he might have had an asthma attack. That would have been a nice twist in the tale. Oh well, I'm just blabbering here.
Um, the animation was very simple. Not overly impressive.
Overall, this submission is probably worth a look because it takes only a couple of seconds to load and it's quite odd (I like odd things).
Anyway, definately not the best I've seen.
Ok I guess it was a decent film...
...But too simple and short. I hope to see your work in the future, improve. The Animations weren't good really and the sound was not really good either. You could have added color. I think you have a fair amount of talent and I hope you improve . :) -Tank Guy
nice idea
i like the idea of a middle-aged balding man walking around the woods killing people. the only problen about this i thought was the short length of it :( gj Mr.Sams
nice
why did the monster build a fucking grave?