Baby
So did you get an A on your shcool thing?
This is a school project i made with newgrounds in mind. It's nine minutes long so be prepared for that length or whatever. Enjoy and please don't hurt the children.
Baby
So did you get an A on your shcool thing?
Is my baby safe? Not with this submission around!!
I'm an atheist and still I am almost praying 4 u!!! This is one of the worst submissions I have ever seen. The subtitles were not at all helpful, try not having them quickly sidescroll across the screen!!! I am sorry to give a newbie such a bad review but it had 2 be said. I suggest you look at many of the GOOD submissions around this site, and learn form them!!! Peace Out, Rock On, and live the good life!!!
Horribly un-funny
I'm sorry to say, but I thought that was just awful. The Michael Jackson thing has already been beaten to death. Basically, the whole movie should be re-done. As I'm sure you have already heard, the lip-synching just got worse as the movie dragged on. The sound was awful (whether it's your mic or whatever), and the graphics were bloody lame. I did like the fact that you used subtitles, but maybe don't have them scrolling along the bottom of the screen. It's too hard to keep up with them if you want to read them as you watch. Have the appropriate phrases match up to what the character is saying without scrolling the text. You should maybe try to submit something that isn't as long. It got old really fast, and it seemed even longer because I failed to see any form of humour in it.
Me likes
The graphics were okay and animations were okay, a bit simple but the idea and humor was good so it was good. Only thing that was bad was the sounds.. the speech was crackly so it was bit bad, but the ending song was just great.
Work with your animations and buy a better mic or something .. keep up the goodies!
Good job
Overall this was pretty damn funny, cept I dropped your score slightly because of some sound issues and your style went down because of the credits, would've been easier to say I did everything I'm god :D.