but although the visuals are maybe ok, the audio quality was terrible, and the pacing of your words was pretty bad, you shouldn't sound like your're reading off a script because it sounds unnatural, try to do better at voiceacting, also, you had some problems with your french, besides the various incorrect inflections, You even messed up the simple song alloutte.
...kinda lame. I guess it was made quite a long time ago though. From what I gathered, some person swapped that kid's shampoo with some other weird potion thingy that made his hair go all screwy. Anyways, nice attempt...
I cudn't undrstand it but u could tell it was poor
I will review this submission as if I understood what was being said, in no way will the fact that I do not understand french affect my judgement of this movie.
There didn't seem to be any story to this whatsoever, it was just pretty random and eventless, but then it was a french project you had to do, so I guess you couldn't make too much with it as you had to focus on certain subjects within it. The sound quality was a bit poor as at times your mouth got too close to the microphone and you couldn't make out what was being said(yes I know I don't understand french but you can still understand the vowel sounds and you can work out what it is thats being said but you just can't understand it). A nice idea to make a flash movie for your French project but maybe submitting it to Newgrounds was a bad idea as it wasn't really Newgrounds material.
Mon Dieu! Je regarde CRAP!
I don't really speak French, but I can expulsez better French out of mon âne.
Don't bother with the subtitles there, Pierre... that would be like giving a back-rub to a sore, swollen turd.
I'm assuming, of course, that your're in high school doing a project for your first-year French class. My advice: Drop French and take art instead.