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The Silent Debate

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This is my first time using flash EVER! But I think I did a pretty good job...ENJOY!!
P.S. My mike is really bad at the end cuz there was alot of laughing and it was really loud...I put captions but please bare with it...

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lol what a lame joke. just goes to show though, body language can be decieving. oh, and only retarded people have silent debates.

reasonably well drawn, terrible voice acting, i don't think it would have suffered at all if you had left out the blooper reel. thx for the captions, hard to understand without.

ok

Funny, yes. Graphic and sound sucked badly. There should be a difference in the pitch of boys and men.

ryer responds:

well im sorry i have ten year old brother and that im a girl ok?

Pretty good

The graphics were pretty good and the story was pretty good to. The voice acting was excellent all the way to the end, when you started screaming. I didnt get the joke since I couldnt hear the Rabii, but you say you put captions in so I'll go back and watch it again. Overall, an excellent flash, esspecially since this way your first one. Keep up the good work!

Wow your first flash? Wondie Job there.

nice work for your first one, it wasn't very funny though, and blooper reels on flash films rarely turn out very good by the way.

ryer responds:

thank you for not being to harsh. Thank you for your comments

Not bad

I gave it a 3. I would have given it a 2, but I thought this was extremely good for being anyone's first movie, so I had to raise it a little. Either way, it doesn't suck.

But, I hope that for your next movie you improve your microphone quality. At the end, I couldn't really hear what was going on at all. Also, you could work on your animation (a person walking actually moves his feet every now and then) - still, the art was pretty good for a beginner if you only added some more movement (perhaps by breaking the character into pieces and tweening the pieces?).

And for some reason I suspect that it could be possible to lower the filesize a little... But I may be wrong, I'm pretty fresh with Flash myself. I just thought it was quite a filesize for telling a joke.

ryer responds:

Thank you ver much! Your comments helped alot! I'll keep going until I get it right! I appreciate it!

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Dec 28, 2004
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