Huh!
I don't really get the storyline but suppose thats hard to show in ten seconds otherwise good animations.
Author Comments
the ten second club (find it on google) is an animation site where you animate ten seconds of diologue and compete with others, this is my attempt at it, I submitted it here to try and direct traffic to my much better movie at new grounds greyTVdungeonscritique it
confusing....
confusing...? nice animation tho, hope to see more like this, just longer
explanation?
yes it was for a 10 sec thing but make another, improve ur graphics, and explain that little clip. its interesting. explain it, s'il vous-plait?
Not great
Its not bad but it needs to have a decent story and have spund effects and be longer, i know it was for some 10 second thing but it was quite short.
5/10
Half of perect, i s'pose its OK for 10 seconds but you should add some SF when the 2 guys are shootin. Also some parts of the there 'speech' are kinda slurred..hard to understand. But great animation! BTW nice ending ^_^;