Yeah...

Not bad man I mean I just joined and I don't know a whole lot about this kinda stuff but yeah what you got here ain't bad at all

hmmm

It's boring honestly.....i didn't watch the whole thing....3/10 because the dude smokes.... I don't know...I'm not the perfect person to rate these but still..I'm a viewr and I find it boring. You should have made a more....interesting start. And then the boring sstuff.

potential

man i have seen so many awsum long running cartoons that have started out just like this so dont be discouraged man do what u planned to do and makeshit loads more

what?

ur violence isn't very violent. i feel like theres something missing. if its a series i really hope u find whatever it is is missing cuz whatever isn't there, its vital...

3.5

There a lot of things to cinsider when watching this. There is no sound and a lack complete character designs and animation, but the file size is a low 75k. To tell you the truth, I would rather it be 750k and have good sound effects and actions from the characters. This new series shows osme potential, having one character have a nightmare about another is interesting - just work on the staging and most of explain it. Is he after him solely because it is a dream, or is he an enemy?

Ryan