Johnys Awesome Review

Talent oozes from your flash animation like puss from this weird lump on my neck... i better go see a doctor about that

YAY FOR RANDOMNESS!

RANDOMNESS IS TEH PWNAGE

oi what song is that?

but it was ok.

Good...

but I've seen better. It's not the most original I've seen. The RL CS one was much better.

Randomness but flushed!

Interesting, I liked the song, it worked well with most of your scenes. I just don't like the fact that theres no plot. I mean, randomness works sometimes, but I don't know what to say.

You show extreme potential in graphics and flash designing so I would suggest making maybe a one or two minute movie with a plot and a story. Randomness is usally made because a plot or story isn't drawn out.

What I could recommend to you is before even creating, get a peice of paper, and brainstorm for five minutes, writing out story lines, settings, and characters. You can sketch, design, do whatever you want, play around with it. You'll find a story plot soon enough!

I love your variety though. It shows that you don't have just one style, but you have many, and can draw many different ways. So that's a plus.

What really got to me was the flashing name at the bottom left. It's professional NOT to do that. What you do is introduce who you are (the bottom right name viewing throughout the WHOLE flash show's that you crave creditation, but that is given to you on the portal and in the beggining or end like regular flash's. A good movie will get deserved creditation, don't worry) However, if you are going to put it in the bottom right like that all the time, lower the opacity, and don't use the green flashing. It just really made it hard to concentrate on the movie itself.

Really looking forward to a plot/story flash made by you! :)