what?......

seriously, if it was your first flash, do you not think that you'ld spend more time on it than churning this doodle? plus the whole idea of it was just pointless, really.

n00b flash at its finest

Look its creative, and im sure u learned alot of things, so im pretty sure why you understand why your getting lower scores than most people. All and all its not bad for a beginner there is definetly some potention in your art skills. If u wanted to make this thing cooler, add a loader, some color and make it longer.

Uh...

That was about nothing, which is why you got a 10 for sound. Other than that, it wasn't really that good.

not bad...

hey that was a decent effort but try some smoother animation and colour

Too short and choppy..

Add more frames to make animation smoother... maybe do something like show a closeup of the old guys face and his expression or something to finish it off.. and some witty comment.. would be a better short that way.